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Comments of chapter undefined of The plot collapses: All the heroines are broken!

indiferente
indiferenteLv4indiferente

as a man, i could not bare to read the oral acene, but was ok

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Sheizzcoldasice
SheizzcoldasiceAuthorSheizzcoldasice

Hope you all are having a good day and enjoyed reading the chapter😊

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Mku_bu
Mku_buLv2Mku_bu

Then Something just snapped something inside of me I didn't care anymore

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Hajimee
HajimeeLv4Hajimee

Hope you don't drop it and Thanks for the chapter !!!

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Suyash_sahu
Suyash_sahuLv4Suyash_sahu

don't drop it it is good

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Anonymoose_Dum
Anonymoose_DumLv4Anonymoose_Dum

Ooga booga man please do finish this. I am oddly interested in this novel of yours.so please continueđŸ™‚đŸąđŸ™‚đŸ€“đŸ’đŸ”đŸ”Ș🗿

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Ppz01
Ppz01Lv14Ppz01

please don't drop this it's fire

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BlackBoxx
BlackBoxxLv13BlackBoxx

thank you for the chapter đŸ±â˜ș

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0_0r
0_0rLv40_0r

Thanks for the chapter

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Adwin_007
Adwin_007Lv4Adwin_007

yaa

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Josh_Ellison
Josh_EllisonLv15Josh_Ellison

It's been a good book so far hope to see what happens next !!!

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DaoistxIiJA8
DaoistxIiJA8Lv1DaoistxIiJA8

Don’t drop this plzzz

SkeleKun
SkeleKunLv4SkeleKun

brother that's aphrodisiac, he done with one round? that's...gonna be hard. F, Mc.

DaoistEren5
DaoistEren5Lv4DaoistEren5

McSimp, pathetic

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RustyBoi
RustyBoiLv4RustyBoi

It’s a good novel don’t drop it, i even have some suggestions. Like make him think of the fact that he already repeated this life multiple times, and that if the protagonist dies the world is very likely to reset, yk, to prevent the heroines from constantly trying to kill him. Also, after the heroines figure out they can all hear their thoughts, one of them making use of that fact to announce sth to them, like Mei Qing making Su Chen read sth in his mind. Like “The correction forces love, beware” to warn other heroines, while being subtle enough to weird mc out but not let him understand it. Obv it needs working, and when you plan it out, like whether it’s a normal world, magic based, cultivation based or whatever, give mc a bit where he reviews what he knows, like remembering the heroines one by one and not necessarily giving out names, some get names, some just a foreshadowing and such. Just give us glimpses of them and their personalities, even if it will take a long time to get to them. Seriously,take what you want from these or even none at all, just continue this fr

Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13Jheydi327

It's soo Incredible How author writes this Chapter using One hand đŸ€”

MuCoffee
MuCoffeeLv13MuCoffee

no penentration??

Cosmic_Wayfinder
Cosmic_WayfinderLv4Cosmic_Wayfinder

no penetration?!??

Unknownuserleft
UnknownuserleftLv13Unknownuserleft

thnx for chappy.. keep it.. is it just mee or the writing quality of this story is dropped or more accurately less than other story?

Redrive
RedriveLv2Redrive

Ha que pena pensei que ele iria até o final com ela [img=faceslap]