Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

uhm you do know jutsu's like substitution and shadow clone didn't exist yet i dont know who made substitution but tobirama made shadow clone yeah maybe Indra made it but was forgotten in time then tobirama made it again by chance but i doubt that

Bro their living in an era where they probably fight the traditional height or something. Indra introduced Jutsus and Hand signs, so obviously I can't make their fight all shinobi-like. The only fireball that was used and the excitement from the crowd was due to how new and awe-inspiring the fireball was. Though the dighting scene was truly trash as I was still new to this and was doing a little bit of copy and paste. I apologize for that though. It's like going to the past and introducing technology to them and then expecting them not to be awed or something. The Jutsus were pretty new back then.

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Thanks for chapter!

You're just a failed writer. You want to write a Wuxia novel, but you don't know how, and then you thought of writing a Naruto fan fiction and adding whatever oriental fantasy you can think of. Or you are stealing this novel from one of the foolish Chinese authors

So many bs in this chapter

this chapter feels chinese

Your forgetting that even if indra can see it coming his body would not be able to reach the speed necessary to avoid him.

the fight sucks

you should work on your grammar

Naito c'est le nom du MC de "The Strongest Hokage"

buen capitulo

thanks for the chapter man.

great chapter, certainly the avatar techniques are good and could hurt a lot of that like metal manipulation, blue fire or the ying and yang state