Comments of chapter undefined of Dual Cultivation In Martial Peak

I really think there shouldn't be too many plot twists or epic scenes, etc. The mc is at rank open Heaven Realm 9th in the past life, it's good to have progression and change his personality a little. But what I think would fit better is a slice of life like, following the story, making different choices than the yang kai and being easier obviously, what's more in martial peak is protagonist plot armor and wouldn't it be good to see that in a fanfic with an op character in a past life. So far it's been very good, but if it's slice of life it will be good. an example is Primogenitor in marvel which is a good slice of life fanfic with an op character, of course people were complaining about where it was going with the story only and with the future because it was straying too far from what would come in the future like movies, etc. to fit into the fanfic. But in fanfic you don't need to think about it that much because each "world" that yang kai goes to practically no one knows about him it's like tongxuan, Heng Luo Star Field and Star Boundary, we'll really like it if it continues, we need more martial peak fanfic. And I'm sorry about the English, I used google translate.

To be honest, I don't see why the MC shouldn't be practically invincible unless there is a huge gap of main realms. For someone who has been at the top, even if he can't access all of his previous power, he should be able to access some of it, although he doesn't have the cultivation realm, the understanding of the laws is still there, it should be possible to use them a little with the power of the soul, especially in the weaker worlds. Damaging the base and reducing its combat power, taking half a century to recover was very bad, even because taking advantage of your cultivation experience and the 'yang kai' opportunities, none of this should be a big problem, impossible for it not to exist even some pills that are more difficult to refine that cannot help recover the foundation. With better techniques, infinitely superior combat experience, better treasures, and superior knowledge, nerfing this type of character always ruins the reading. The best thing is to make the character take things less seriously and focus a little more on the 'slice of life' rather than weakening him so as not to make the story dull, that being said, it's really difficult to find a balance on both sides, I think than for all writers.

Here I thought it new chapter BUT NO

my only complaint would be the author trying to make Mc more normal, after all he was an expert in 9 open heaven, I can't see his experience and understanding of laws losing to mortals, no matter how weak he gets he should practically be very strong because his own merit

Thanks for the Info but was It necessary to waste an entire Chapter to just tell us this Notice? Author could've just informed us through an Author's Note at the Bottom of the Previous Chapter.

Su Mu could make an exchange with Qing Lou, she could help him against Yang Bai and after that he could help her get rid of her curse

it would be quite easy for him to fix his foundation with his knowledge and some of the items he already has or he can do some BS dual cultivation with the transcendent queen he is about to visit and have that fix his issue and then continue with the story while having him be more cautious and learning more things and training more seriously

bro fight main boss of lower world and suffered setback and dragon phinyx inheritance cave have much more than seeing to eye cause no one sense them and only mc has the ability to see through the formation of his dear friend like set up for only mc and there u can find a five elements and yon yang tresure with a suitable cultivation method so that u can make a strongest foundation for the journey of martial peak and it is something like they know u and also don't know by trading with dao laws for ur reincarnation mc's previous life closed fully with no karma and u start new as to fulfill the saving your universe world.

just rewrite it tbh. if the changes content is massive, make a new rewrite book and copy paste this whole content to the new rewritten book. create new chapter in this book with notification and link to your new rewritten book. if the changed content is minor, just edit the chapters in this book which needed to change, then make a new chapter like this notifying us which chapters need to change. been a while since your last update tho i guess you already given up at this point? hopefully not because im enjoying this book. good luck

I wish interactions with the secretary of Shan Qin Luo who comes to free his master who must fall in love with the mc again, the fights of the Yang family for the position of patriarch, that he goes to the ash gray cloud to recover from an injury has the soul and the final confrontation with Yang Bai there then the destruction of the city of the 8 big family and his separation with his lovers during the battle

Thank you for not giving up author-san

isn't the leader of the ash grey mountain want shan quingluo , why don't you let him attack the base and let shan quingluo escape at that time but su mu chases after her

please keep it up dear Author