DarkWolfShiro
as much as I love all your stories, something about this one just doesn't feel right. it's still a good story but I don't get excited for it like I do your guild of gamers stories like tamer, Nightmare, Tinker, etc. I think it has something to do with the illusion theme not really fitting the Harry Potter world as well as some others would maybe a better choice would be an equally powerful but more violent world like maybe game of thrones or something