Eren_fraser
The story is kinda draging on right now. It feels like this is the only thing that happened in the last few chapters and it doesnt feel significant. All that happened is that his project was aproved. It doesnt matter what it is. But to you so many chapters just for aproval is a waste. You have really great ability to write and your understanding of gods is entertaining. But come on i need some life in the story. Only feeling i am getting right now is mild calmness.