Crims0n_Dragon
JStyles:wow a trashy beta reader who doesn't know the consequences of saving Kakashi's dad
i love your writing style, your great at it. though I have a problem with writers trying to keep the story the same like they do. because the thought process is not only is the main character going to let the story happen but he's going to make sure that those atrocities happen he's going to not only let a clan get murdered but also probably make sure by murdering them himself. maybe not go that far but you get the point. I see a lot of parallels between those stories and this one.