Comments of chapter undefined of Becoming Dungeon Fodder

sahejRocks

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Sapphire_PraiseLv13Sapphire_Praise

Nice chapter there is alot of Grammer errors you could easily fix them by using Microsoft word

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sahejRocksAuthorsahejRocks

ikr, this was my first novel, so it needs a lot of changes now lol.

Sapphire_Praise:I know the feeling trust me it's a headache had to do the samething

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Kenneth_Mceuen_0675Lv14Kenneth_Mceuen_0675

Thanks for the chapter

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