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At least he was thoughtful

Yeah the war ended and peace has returned

yeah he loves those beautiful ladies and who could blame him

You can't let a good thing go like her

So many errors I would recommend using word or hiring someone who knows the English language

Going to make me blush

I hope that's a good wow about to add two more chapters but I'll have to move every Chap back 2

Thank you I have more chapters just need 13 and 14 revised first. I'm on the app already spent a couple hundred dollars.

why not upload to Word it catches so many simple errors

You can do stay positive me

Couldn't say this kept existing out everything not sure if the free read is a scam or not but to many cheap bugs!

another story that doesn't give you a ticket after reading g for longer then 10 minutes these cheap bugs get annoying after a while

You can feel the emotion of this character

don't receive points for reading for 20 minutes plus after being recommended these cheap bugs get annoying and no human tk contact on phone

This story often delete my spot when I read it has happened almost every month very annoying!

not much in these chapters

lot of Grammer error, and your not using the space bar to separate the sentences.

It could have been better if they contained to write it and revise it