Comments of chapter undefined of The Heroine Eavesdropped on My Voice Heart

So a loser that reincarnated as Basara? sad no bro Basara

It's a shame, Basara was a good mc

now that's a transmigrator at its finest, they think that the girl are for conquering. there is a lot of those in fanfiction.

Hmmm I don't like this, Your taking away the MCs kinda special status by doing this.

author-san, first of all I like your work. But I want to make a constructive criticism. before that I hope you don't treat this as an offense or want to rule your work. said that. I already knew that you would put other works in the story, it was obvious. shinmaou no. at first sight it is a good choice.because they are similar. but you, did not prepare the plot behind the plot. I know there was an explanation from the mc, from nobody from the supernatural to know about the cultivators. was forced? yea. but they were acceptable. they could be confused, for being special human guarquer in dxd. cao cao, or pedragom. are good examples. but mio naruse is the daughter of a demon king. yuki is a heroine. this anime has an entire society already estavelicia. how are you going to make two animes collide without being totally forced. Of course it's a fanfic. it shouldn't make sense. but for me, it will destroy the charm of your work. if it were you would change that part of the story as you go. well that was it thanks for the chapter. I like your author-san story, I hope it doesn't get lost like the majority.

Suddenly this fanfic has become less appealing.

Little does this guy know that theres a villain out there itching to give Issie some company.

pobre basara, el era smooth

basically was decent character but making him a total perv like other he reincarnation , transmigrator, closest perv with a complex, or just think he is a hero and should have all the women? anyway looking forward to more and answers to the questions . thanks for the chapter, cheers!

I think it is good, thanks for the chapter, sensei, since I do not like basara and the one who tells me otherwise because the NL is not read since there they ruin it , The personality of basara almost as in the final volumes, in the first volumes was great but little by little they ruined it ,That's why I hope sensei completely destroys basara who suffers hahahahahaha I want to see the world of basara burn by Tian's hands

hahaha 🤣🤣 a new challenge 🤣🤣

Oh, it's a pity. But this work begins to look like some kind of sur. I'll pass.

Love it, xd cant wait to see more, now we have a reincarnated Mc from a fanfiction

I already called this one will be Reincarnated mark my word, next one will probably an Evil Demon lord whos soul is going to take over the protag..

Thanks for the chapter

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And drop 1/5

Thanks