Comments of chapter undefined of Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse
Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse
Margrave
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when i read about the one on one battles I was hoping they would be skipped if not important so im grateful they were skipped. As for evelyn i like her character and think you're doing a good job. The only thing I'm worried about is evelyn seems like the type who wants to rise on her own without help. so i can see her wanting to leave kaze on her own further down the line after they go to the cultivation realm, and that's not something i want. Tbh I wouldnt be a fan of any major seperation between his harem members
Thanks for the reply, yeah i didnt think that they would break up or anything just the standard "I must leave to train in the ice sect to catch up to you, see you in 200+ chapter" trope that is way more common than it should be. Based on your response that doesn't seem likely so thank you haha
Margrave:Thank you for your feedback! You are in luck: everyone has a tick and relationship anxiety ruins stories for me unless it's well done. So that's not a feature of my novels. If someone's I'm the harem they're there forever. You get to see how someone as extreme as Evalyn comes to accept being in a harem. Because ultimately, that's what this story is about. So take heed: Evalyn won't leave Kaze, there won't be a temporary break up, and she will join the harem. Its not a spoiler, it's an expectation. Thanks for the feedback and for reading!
I think Evalyn is fine. I mean, I've seen where she's come from and how she got here. Pacing is a hard question for me because I feel like I'm an outlier with my opinion. which is I'm here for the ride, so as long as it's interesting, do your thing. but most people have certain expectations where I do not, so I don't know how to answer that question
