Comments of chapter undefined of Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape (Wednesday/The Addams Family, HP, Star Wars)
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Shadow7Blue
Rather disappointing chapter, I think the author should have developed the character of Amelia a little more before getting there. By dint of talking too much about Lily, you have neglected the other characters. I didn't feel any satisfaction and it's sad, you could have written that Severus slept with a random woman it would have been the same.
I’ve got no problem with the pairing per se. I personally prefer Pandora… I do think Amelia would have been a great choice too 🫤 but it feels a little half assed and random. I mean, Severus is supposed to be working his way back to Padme with the second chance time travel has afforded him (not that he deserves it). I don’t hate him finding other love interests but in my head it’s definitely out of character for him. Lily is a possibility considering Snape’s undying love for her… but I think I’d rather see him kill that part of his heart unless she throughly apologizes. If he does go through with this ‘loveless’ exchange I’ll have a little less respect for the character but it’s not gonna ruin the story or anything… not unless the author really bungles things 😅. If this devolves into a harem thing 🤷🏻♂️ I can get behind it… but it’s really going against the character he’s been showing us.
