Comments of chapter undefined of Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape (Wednesday/The Addams Family, HP, Star Wars)
I will apologized first since it may be me just ranting cause the mc is annoying me. Sorry, and feel free to just ignore it. Okay, Im getting a bit irratated on some part of this novel. The entire premise is good and interesting but the character and chapter is getting on my nerve. At this moment, when it come to severus trauma, it seem that the logical side, Vader is failing pitifully to lower it. It between a complete irrational dark side rage or a full blown restraint. Maybe i wrong, but the minute black and potter attack, the mc should be decisive enough to knock them out. If he can't control himself, he should have train in that than what he been doing in the previous chapters. Doesnt Occulumency help? The Lily situation is annoying to me personally and i wish the MC would just move on. Around her, he being restraint or too mindful of her. It feel like he is going to overlap padma and lily together and stop him from doing something logical. He is not Dark Vader but he is not a goodie two shoe. The relationship between the two woild just be toxic. Now for the chapters. I know each chapter can't have important stuff in it for story progression, but something can be finished in two or three lines. I feel like the pass four chapter before the duel could have been put into one. I apologized, i feel like I'm ranting and it probably best to ignore it, but im just saying what i feel. The book is good with just a few annoying points to me.
I liked the chapter because it reminded us that it's not just Anakin doing what he wants, normally. Sometimes I even forget that the body was Snape's. I would still like him to hook up with Lily, though. After all, she's just a kind person who sometimes misinterprets things or tends to see the good in people like Sirius and Potter. I know she was really unfair to Snape, but she's human and no one is perfect.
How many times does he have to say that he’s pathetic before he stops being pathetic? I don’t like any of this BS. Picking on Draco was just childish and stupid. Using an excuse that it was a sharpening stone so poorly thought out that it’s ridiculous. He could just go incognito to knockturn alley and fish for trouble. Can he just use the force to stop his heart from beating? Stop his emotions from getting out of control? Stop acting like such a wreck? Even wizards can use occlumency to keep their emotions in check yet he was showing such scorn and derision toward wizards… it’s ridiculous. Instead he’s tempting fate by playing cat and mouse with the dark side. Maybe he should meditate and sort out his emotions with this wizard half of his soul before he starts playing peekaboo with that darker side of the force.
