I really liked the chapter, I think it eliminated the draco x Lily feeling that I had in the chapter, that they know each other, but I think it would be cool even though it's not a severus x Lily couple, if you restarted their friendships, for what you wrote her to amazing , which was great since they usually make her hateful just because she doesn't love severus
Imagine the impact bacta tanks would have on the world by itself. I can't wait to see what his company produces. I wouldn't sell druids though, he could monopolize many more markets if he waits to sell droids. You should consider releasing computers or stronger alloys on the market and see what happens.