Comments of chapter undefined of Into The Kaleidoscope

I like where this is going, cuz never seen a con man be a MC, but his dialogue with the ring is extremely annoying. It is just constantly getting him into situations and annoying in general. It's okay if they talk occasionally, but the ring is getting too much screen time.

I absolutely love the amount of detail and thinking you had put into the mechanics of his magecrafts. Honestly an underappreciated part of this fanfic. I see way too many people complain about stuff that actually make this fanfic good and steers it off the path of uncreative writing and staleness. You write good, so please don't take some of the critiques as fact, because people can make bad takes. Also, here, take my power gem!

the drop in views is natural, the sense of novelty dies down, and some like me wait for a few chapters before reading them all at once. don't get discouraged, the game of throne is boring as a lot had said, but I think you're making it more interesting, just remember that jump chain is meant to be 10 or so chapters a world before moving to the next and coming back to some old world, I understand that since this is the first world and his base it's going to take some more chapters, just do you

You should make MC a cannibal, and have him eat bran, he should also eat his ring to unlock his 4th eye

I'd advise just decrease the whole political part of the GOT, Its rather confusing , you could just use it as a training arc but with timely placed politics after lots of logic and magic. And you can make him a bit stronger because such lack of power and full on bragging just gives a false sense of power , its unnerving. btw. Thanks for the chapter.

maybe the story is getting too slow and that's why the views dropping or it could be something else

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Personally I think he should persue alchemy, numerology and astromancy if he is taking a scientific approach towards magic. it would yield him benefits as those schools of magic are often driven on scientific principles and overlap with some scientific principles

Thanks for the chapter also when is tge arifuerta arc?

Thanks for the chapter

TFTC

Nice!

Thanks for the chappy!

For me it's not the problem of the fic being boring or anything but the problem is that there aren't enough chapters so I just chose to leave the fic for a few days and then binge read the collected chapters.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

nice

Obrigado pelo capitulo.

I’m still here, but I’m not a GOT fan. I know it’s good, but I don’t watch shows with crazy politics, back stabbing, etc. Basically just waiting for the mc to leave for an anime world.