Comments of chapter undefined of REVERSE PLAY IN LOSS MOMENT
REVERSE PLAY IN LOSS MOMENT
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Please improve your grammar. The novel itself is amazing but the grammar will make many readers drop it immediately. Do not worry and practice so it will be helpful and improve your writing.
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Aria_Monrow:Let me be blunt. It's not the grammar mistakes but the way you piece the sentences which makes some unable to enjoy the novel. You should write it like this...take this as an example. I just rewrote it right now so it is going basic but get an example from this. It was an incredible change brought by fate as person A and B got married. Not even three months had passed by that the news of (said person) becoming pregnant was heard. Alex was delighted to know of this news, his grandfather was also content with the fantastic news but (for whatever reason it could be) Dr. Jamie was horrified. Like this..change it into something that is readable, even if it is basic. It will be gun for others