Comments of chapter undefined of The rise of the Arc knight(RWBY fanfic)

so basically nothing happened in this chapter?and you need to work on your delivery style man half the time I was convinced ki the raids were happening in two different places or you were doing some before after scenes

I don't understand, he used the sand to hide and jump on top of a carriage instead of killing them?

Will ther be more updates?

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Aburrido, una vez mas esperaba que fuera una pelea no esto, quería leer como el protagonista golpeaba a un montón de extras junto a Neo pero fue bastante mediocre este capítulo agrando cosas sin importancia o tratando de hacer la pelea mas espectacular, solo para terminar siendo muy aburrido, se toma muy enserio a si misma algo muy distinto a RWBY que sabe tomarse las peleas con humor