Comments of chapter undefined of The rise of the Arc knight(RWBY fanfic)
The rise of the Arc knight(RWBY fanfic)
DaoistyaSOLa
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As for the harem i have to say im really satisfied with the answer, not only you have a top limit of 5 which is good, but also the girls wont be having romances between them, which was my main worry, Also the fact you will only add reasonable characters to the harem and not characters like weiss that wont be fine with this, keep it as realistic as possible, to be honest i dont care about weiss, i mean its not a ''Meh so boring'' like phyrra but its more like im good either if she joins or not, dont care too much about her, My only request is to please Add Blake xD, not only its possible to use your poligamy culture in Menagerie, because of the harsh conditions faunus has been forced to go through but also, it can be more logical for them to do this, specially the hunters with auras, Also the same in Vacuo that its a ''law of the jaungle'' Culture.
Now i suggestion i have, in the volume 9 and thx to other fanfictions i have come to know there is a Domain that belongs to the god of light just like salem using the God of dark domain, aparently its a domain that exist Phisically in the same Realm mortals are instead of being a dimention completly out of their hands, meaning mc can go there and get to the place salem was cursed with inmortality, i dont know how much of this is truth but if it is, why not becoming himself and his girls friends inmortals?
ok i have a lot of things to say, so i will be short, First of all Thanks for this chapter really cleared all my doubts, i can say i have no doubts so far acording to the novel, as for the Pace of the novel i like it, altough i hope that unlike Moshuko tensei you wont let us a unsatisfactory final, they went like ''Eri and Rudy die, The End'' and i was like ''but what about his other wives? did they meet in the afterlife too? did they move on because of their long lifespawn?'' i just wanted to ask you if you are focusing on the Age with the protagnoist focus, then please be kind to show us what happend with him and his girls family, tell us if they met in the afterlife, since remember its canon the heaven exist in remanent thx to Oum.
I am liking this so far! A little disappointed that Weiss won’t be added though… I mean her whole arc is about breaking free from others expectations of her and truly doing what she wants to do. Even honoring her family’s legacy and restoring Schnee name is something that she choses. I could totally see her being upset at character having a harem, then when she starts letting go of her prejudice and others expectations going for seeking an actual family atmosphere. Even if she is acting prideful and tsun in the process. Well that’s just my views though! Either way, it’s your fic and I am sure I will enjoy it either way with what tou have written so far! Cheers mate!
Ngl tho im sad that weiss isnt part of the harem that points u have made were all logical and in line with the characters personality and thinking so im fine with it, as with the other points u talked about i would say im pretty exited for the development of this story just knowing u have planned a head where the story will go and how it will work.
I've always viewed the probably of large differences in Male/female ratios to be a given. in both a semi apocalyptic world and ceaseless a war (given the male propensity to get themselves killed in conflict). so I always thought that something along the lines of 1/2 of all Males enroll in huntsman's academy's but only 1/5 of the female population join. even with these ratios females still slightly outnumber males at the schools. I always viewed this as a possible and viable way to explain polygamy in this world. as well as making "donations" common practice.
