Comments of chapter undefined of The Reincarnation of the Kingmaker

Too much exposition. Should have slowly implemented this information throughout the story - would have created suspense.

Ah yes the classic villain telling everything to the mc before he reincarnated. Very thick plot armour. Kinda disappointing ngl.

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if this is the most powerful god I'd be truly disappointed in this story hopefully it's just a powerful deity but is still what greater beings consider weak

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This is a good start

Not bad!

What a cliffhanger

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Love it!

This is bad I got hooked by chapter 1

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