Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

I love this story because it spits on fate, it doesn't care that characters like Raleigh or the World Government or anyone else expected Luffy to become King just because he's the reincarnation of Joy Boy. It truly emphasizes that if a man has enough ambition, strength, and is daring enough he can DEFY fate and even win against Fate's Chosen!

Thank you author san the first time I have seen a real king of the pirates declared I give you all the respect in the world I’m happy I took this journey with ashen and I’m appy you finished through strong and didn’ dropt

Thanks for the chapter. Amazing how you managed to relate all the facts, but now if these facts really hurt canonical, then mu dear author, hurray would end up literally breaking One Piece. 😬😱😱

I read many one piece fiction abt one piece but by far this is the best one ever

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter and more

thanks for the chapter

Sabes si esto al final termina siendo canon seríamos los primeros en saberlo es poco probable pero

this is such a good moment, been long since I followed this fic, thanks for the chapter hope for more

This was awesome!

Congratulations on the story, he spat in the face of the DESTINY of this world, now Ashen is King of Pirates 🤴🏽

Thanks for the chapter, you showed us a proclaimed pirate king that literally apart from the knowledge of the original story that was literally altered, he had nothing unique, all he achieved was pure effort and that shiki reference to the white beard scene.

But what a perfect chapter, ladies and gentlemen. I'm waiting for the outcome of this wonderful story, I hope for more author 🤲🏾

Thanks for the chapter 🙏

Thanks For the Chapter!

Dude Nika as a lunarian

Pfffhahahahahaha reverse mountain? Seriously?!. Hahahahaha

this is my first time actually getting to read about void century and one piece.its location made me laugh so hard 🤣

amazing, all the theories are the same i have seen about the energy and location of laugh tale. regardless of how the truth is in the future, the effort you made is great