Comments of chapter undefined of Vampir Lord: Erotic RPG

Odd choice to change from third person pov to first person pov

Good first chapter. However, it get a little confusing when he start talking about the future plot, since we have no prior knowledge of this Carmilla, hearing all those speculation like that out of the blue was a bit confusing for me.

Interesting, I think this story has a lot of potential, thanks for the chapter

Well so i am waiting for mister girl harem chapters so i might as Well check this novel from you and boi oh boi quality dont dissapoint Thanks for the chapter <3

Will say, loved the DxD reference

I’m excited for A LOT of character development because this guy is incredibly pathetic.

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nice start