Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn into Young Justice
Reborn into Young Justice
Shinmon_Dagger
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worst fanfic of young justice ever. He already has bad luck landing up in DC, and now you're telling me he has worse luck on top of that!? He even got spotted on camera loser MC. I would suggest you rewrite this. I hate young justice as is, and you made me hate it even more.
CustomFireblast:It's a good thing no one cares what u have to say. Why read a fanfic of a show u hate make zero sense.
Thanks for the chapter. Some suggestions, shorten your paragraphs. Your story could be the best to be ever written, but I still wouldn’t read it if there are these huge paragraphs. Another thing is the dialogue. This may be personal preference, but I think most people agree with me on this. Using the chat group type just makes conversations feel robotic and unreal. Switching to the conventional "*insert sentence*" type of dialogue may be hard at first, but it would make your story way better.
