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Comments of chapter undefined of Demon Immortal

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TBS_23
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Felt like the chapter dragged a bit... Felt like something that should have been a quarter of a chapter was over explained... Author does that sometimes, should be aware and try to not do it most times... Explaining lethargy over & over isn't development...

kirupakaran
kirupakaranAuthorkirupakaran

Will take note... Appreciate the feedback.