kirupakaran
Prolific writer, aspiring author, bibliophile, and a wrestling fanatic. Love anything and everything to do with fantasy and storytelling.
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Ha ha ha... I had the same thought flash by as I wrote drinking scenes. I thought it was only my mind that thought like that. Maybe, I will try to diversify a bit. Thanks for the input.
Nah, not happening... I can give an author's guarantee on that...
Ah, there is a twist in it. Wasnt initially planned, but for convenience sale, I switched most names to Chinese for better flow. As for Duncan's name, a surprise is present in story, but it is a long wait...
Thanks, I also like reading and writing about these enlightenment moments... However they are a chore to depict properly. Thoughts don't actually follow a set pattern. They jump from one thread to another. Especially when your mind is whirling fast. Trying to make them coherent was a little hardThanks for your appreciation
Ah, that was a decision that took me a long time to come to... At this stage, mc still has some misgivings from his mortal life. He hasn't completely shed his morality yet. He also hasn't completely embraced being a cultivator. As the story progresses, MC's character will change slowly and he will become more ruthless.
I felt that the bloodline has been used too frequently... Moreover these are fights within his capacity. In my mind, the MC must be forced to dig deep for him to activate his bloodline. At this stage, he still hasn't gotten full control over his bloodline and is only exploring the basics. But don't worry, the bloodline will be a major part as story progresses
Its a function celebrated in November in India... We can consider it as your early wishes...
I have reduced such things of late. My later chapters have a format of only putting the story out there...
True there... but inane means trivial or not interesting
Ha... I have had this doubt as a reader as well. As a writer, let me explain the mindset behind the words... The level of genius is determined by the person speaking. Here an ordinary mortal is speaking, so her exposure remains at that level. Later, sect disciples or other people in higher regions will say the same words. But their level of exposure will be bigger than the first one... It will carry on like this.. The higher the level the more exposure. what one considers genius may not be universally applicable...
True... but the MC is typically brash and as much as he tries to act cautious, sometimes it just comes out...
MC didn't call Liang Tianye master after being made his direct disciple. That's disrespectful in cultivation culture. While Duncan doesn't know it, it only shows his inexperience... Hope that clears it up