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Comments of chapter undefined of Creating Artifact Spirits To Be My Wives: Am I A Blacksmith?

Relhak
RelhakLv12Relhak

Eh. Pretty disappointed with the way the author approached this subject. so much potential was lost in the unveiling of his class. Why jump straight into and give the MC all of the required knowledge from the get go? It would be more interesting to read about his struggle to come to terms with his new class, finding a job as an apprentice blacksmith and then him working tirelessly to forge his first blade only for it to become a girl once he was done. Some good drama and comedy could also be used if the girl e.g., was naked and cue typical trope comedy. This instead felt like the author just jumped straight over a lot of potential character building.

ThrowFace
ThrowFaceLv14ThrowFace

it breaks the immersion a little bit that there wasn't flavor text for the designing of the sword. I guess this will be purely a waifu collecting, maybe face smacking story. 🤔

Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv13Sin_of_GREED

one chapter is enough to tell this yet another trash novel