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Relhak1mthCommentedThis tiny bit of gaze didn't escape Su Yurou's fiery eyes. She held Xu Wenping's arm and faced the oncoming salesperson. She smiled lightly and said, "Choose a suit for my husband!"detailWhy Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?Magical Realism · A Small Purple Umbrella- Relhak1mthCommented
Who else read that sentence with a Red Alert voice in their mind?
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How much older was Sia? I mean, Sarah is a third year, so she must be 2 years older than MC. But ai believe I read in an earlier chapter (when he dreamt of the orphanage), that someone said that she was thr same age or 1 year older, right? How does this make sense?
'If only her… perhaps she'd be able to convince everyone, right? I might spend all my life chasing her footsteps.' - Relhak2mthCommented
Yo, that guy, Sun Tzu, was really ahead of his time, eh?
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Exactly my thoughts.
"I will be very honest with you. There are some things about my current circumstance that I cannot tell you. But at the same time, I cannot lie to you. What should I do?" He was so distraught that he no longer wanted to make Daphne's decisions for her. He just asked her what to do, because she normally had a better idea than he did. - Relhak4mthCommented
Have a like for writing the exact comment that I was going to make.
Lin Tian covered his swollen face and walked aimlessly on the streets. Right now, he only wanted to return to Cerulean Planet as soon as possible. He did not want to leave a bad impression on his boss on his first day of work. - Relhak5mthCommented
Yo, brainwashed much. Sounds almost like Japanese imperialist kamikaze. Someone says "Go die" and then you'll feel happy.
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Straight out of the ccp playbook
For this, Lu Yuan even set his first five-year plan.detailI Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My ProficiencyEastern Fantasy · Flying Fatty - Relhak5mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1 Nebula System
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He's a bird?
"I'm Kingsley Fisher, a member of the student council." - Relhak6mthCommented
Eh. Pretty disappointed with the way the author approached this subject. so much potential was lost in the unveiling of his class. Why jump straight into and give the MC all of the required knowledge from the get go? It would be more interesting to read about his struggle to come to terms with his new class, finding a job as an apprentice blacksmith and then him working tirelessly to forge his first blade only for it to become a girl once he was done. Some good drama and comedy could also be used if the girl e.g., was naked and cue typical trope comedy. This instead felt like the author just jumped straight over a lot of potential character building.
Ch 2 The Only Hidden Class in the World: Artifact Spirit Blacksmith! - Relhak8mthCommented
I heard that there's a universal constant, a Heavenly law, if you will. Just like the universe is infinite and ever expanding, the speed of light is constant, and the celestial objects attract each other, so too are pink haired girls in anime and literature guaranteed yanderes.
Inside the mirror, a beautiful girl with pale skin and light pink hair was lying in her massive double bed. Fours posts, with soft silky sheets hanging down in a spiral. - Relhak8mthCommented
Yo, you're 16 - basically 1 year older. Who are you calling a child?
'She is just a child.' - Relhak1yrReplied to AlsielLkrCh 40 Unimportant Things
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Again, a typo. "HE smilede awkwardly and....."
Xu Chang'an's expression froze. She smiled awkwardly and took a sip of tea. "Indeed, I can't hide anything from you. Miss… when did you realize?" - Relhak1yrCommented
I think this is a typo. It's meant to state that she likes the noodles that HE made.
Xu Chang'an felt that this dish was good because she could eat her fill. Most importantly, she liked to eat the noodles she made. - Relhak1yrCommented
Saber.... Is that you?
The beautiful woman on the left had jade-like fair skin, blue eyes like the clear blue skies, and long silky blonde hair lace-braided into a bun at the back but left loose at the front. She wore a simple blue and white renaissance dress with protective silver-white armor plating attached and held a silver greatsword that was almost as long as her height and wide as half her waist. - Relhak1yrCommented
My yandere senses are tingling
Unlike Jin Yi who have blonde hair, she have beautiful whiteish Pink hair with red tip at the end of her hairs, while her pink eyes radiates kindness there is also something hidden, something dangerous. - Relhak1yrCommentedCh 93 Chapter 94-Just The Beginning