NanotechPikachu
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I lik this first chapter. I’m hoping he get all five colors so you know I have to keep reading.
Thnx for trying out my book.
I like the concept, it's a new outlook on magical affinity and those that can use it
The whole thing about magic and tesr is written beautifully, loved it ❤️
Nice chapter
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Cool first chapter! I can't wait to see what affinity he has~
great work, lets keep moving, writting is always a leaening process it will get better with time
This is a good first chapter
Your overall novel is good....just correct the grammar mistakes and it'll be fine 😶. btw check out my novel..i just started writing it and you can actually see how to put in the words at the write moment. Origin Series; Rise Of The Walker
