NanotechPikachu
Your overall novel is good....just correct the grammar mistakes and it'll be fine đ¶. btw check out my novel..i just started writing it and you can actually see how to put in the words at the write moment. Origin Series; Rise Of The Walker
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I like the concept, it's a new outlook on magical affinity and those that can use it
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I lik this first chapter. Iâm hoping he get all five colors so you know I have to keep reading.
The whole thing about magic and tesr is written beautifully, loved it â€ïž
Nice chapter
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Cool first chapter! I can't wait to see what affinity he has~
great work, lets keep moving, writting is always a leaening process it will get better with time
This is a good first chapter