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Comments of chapter undefined of Runeterra: Amygdala (Check Profile for Rewrite)

cheeki_breeki
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noice i dont remember old kal much but didnt he just abandon her

BillNyeThePGGuy
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Yeah I thought that type of character would be too boring to follow at the beginning, so in this rewrite I changed it up a good deal

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Klovnen
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I like what you did in this rewrite the other Kal was too much of an emotionless puppet, though I understand what you were trying to do in the earlier version I think this Kal will work better in the long run. hope you continue with this FF because I was really interested in the first version, I'm sure you'll do better in this one

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Kono_Timoda
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I remember when you were much worst at writing. You have improved IMENSLY, can't wait for more chapters.

LeBlorf
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Oh, it's back.

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General_Mahoraga
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Thanks for the chapter

TheNiggDj
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Kakali

DestonDark
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Thanks for the chapter

Coldman
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