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Comments of chapter undefined of Primordial Sin System

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Primordial Sin System

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Dark_Crow_Dao
Dark_Crow_DaoLv13Dark_Crow_Dao

Nice Chapter, and yes i see that there is indeed an improvement in writing but i think that sometimes the development of the women he chooses is missing, so you can look into this part of development ( i understand that sins nature affect it, but with a little work, it should become better ), i would also like to thank you for your work and the mass release which i appreciate very much and i will continue to support you. Good luck Sicko.

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No_one4u
No_one4uLv4No_one4u

Just going to be another tournament solely to win cause our mc don't know what is losing

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Nikita_Ram_2521
Nikita_Ram_2521Lv3Nikita_Ram_2521

next chapter?????

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Nikita_Ram_2521
Nikita_Ram_2521Lv3Nikita_Ram_2521

when will new chapters get updated

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Nikita_Ram_2521
Nikita_Ram_2521Lv3Nikita_Ram_2521

there is good improvement in story. but there is no improvement in releasing of chapters

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brokensouls
brokensoulsLv1brokensouls

The quality of writing was on top, and now it has become even better. It is immediately clear that the author is trying to improve his story. Thank you for the chapters and I wish you success in all your endeavors đŸ–€đŸ”„â™„ïž

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GoddessAlbedo
GoddessAlbedoLv13GoddessAlbedo

Nothing to say Other then Thanks 👍

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Mountain_Yogi
Mountain_YogiLv12Mountain_Yogi

Loved the chapter, Waiting for the tournament where MC gets more fun.

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Sajjad_Hossain_1537
Sajjad_Hossain_1537Lv3Sajjad_Hossain_1537

next chapter please........

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Akhand_Bharat
Akhand_BharatLv12Akhand_Bharat

bro where are you...........

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Nikita_Ram_2521
Nikita_Ram_2521Lv3Nikita_Ram_2521

???? will there be any update today

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Mehedi_Hasan_Mahin
Mehedi_Hasan_MahinLv4Mehedi_Hasan_Mahin

author san...💀

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Nikita_Ram_2521
Nikita_Ram_2521Lv3Nikita_Ram_2521

author is handsome please upload the next chapter

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Chinaza_Joel
Chinaza_JoelLv4Chinaza_Joel

am waiting for ur update please or do u want me to recainate and finish it up for u

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Sajjad_Hossain_1537
Sajjad_Hossain_1537Lv3Sajjad_Hossain_1537

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.............Authorrrrr.....You are making us maddddd......😠😠😠😠Why are you not realising next chapters... 😠😠😠😠

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Sajjad_Hossain_1537
Sajjad_Hossain_1537Lv3Sajjad_Hossain_1537

go mc go..auther you are the best...Please next chapter

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Phi0fany_11531
Phi0fany_11531Lv14Phi0fany_11531

nice chapter

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DaoistjUIpf3
DaoistjUIpf3Lv14DaoistjUIpf3

Great chapters hope for more to be release.

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Daoist688654
Daoist688654Lv14Daoist688654

Thanks for the mass release of Chapters 👍and there is an improvement but there is something missing (I don't know I'm not an Autor)

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