Comments of chapter undefined of Overlord: In the world of Danmachi

Overlord: In the world of Danmachi

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Don_shoferLv3Don_shofer

the story is going well, but there are parts that are not understood. time jumps for no reason that there is no clear information such as when you go to the dungeon and you did not explain who the supposed companions are and you also leave without explaining what follows with the elf

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XshameeAuthorXshamee

thanks for the heads up, will fix them in the future, about entering the dungeon and companion it will be a POV of an unfortunate adventurer maybe Bell or someone else, as for the what happened to the elf Ryuu, may be a few chapters later.

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Leylin_Farlier99Lv14Leylin_Farlier99

thanks for the chapter and finally, The Overlord is back, was tired to seeing how he was in that pathetic state, but now he is back in all his Unholy Glory.

1yr