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Xshamee

Xshamee

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  • Xshamee
    Xshamee1yr
    Replied to Ozenn

    Thank you for your feedback. However, that won't be an issue, Hestia's personality in this fanfic is already different from the actual story, which will be seen in future chapters.

    Ch 11 Reconnaissance
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    Xshamee1yr
    Replied to Don_shofer

    thanks for the heads up, will fix them in the future, about entering the dungeon and companion it will be a POV of an unfortunate adventurer maybe Bell or someone else, as for the what happened to the elf Ryuu, may be a few chapters later.

    Ch 10 Whole Once More
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    Xshamee1yr
    Replied to Ozenn

    His character never changed, but the placeholder personality acting up. Its like Suzuki's mentality becoming darker after transmigrating as an overlord. While, I could ignore it and write something that Ainz would do, but then the actions would be without consequence. After all, he transmigrated not reincarnated, the body is not even his. But again, its just seven chapters of prologue (he didn't even dive the dungeon or interact with the story characters yet), there's barely any world building or content to the story.

    Ch 7 Misfortune
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    Xshamee1yr
    Replied to Hugo_Adam

    Thank you for the feedback. I will keep it in mind. Also, still not sure if it will be harem or not

    Ch 7 Misfortune
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    Xshamee1yr
    Replied to Ozenn

    Well, I am going for the realism. Ainz is in an unknown world, doesn't trust anyone yet, going through nightmares, clashes of multiple personalities, emotional suppression doesn't activate properly, also thrown in world in a human body with humans powered by god's that genuinely could end him with wrong move, no friends or allies and some gods that may see through his deception, beauty turned curse. At this point, going against the flow, or gaining attention is the last thing he want to do. But he will get dragged eventually.

    Ch 5 Exploring Orario
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    Xshamee1yr
    Replied to Daoist342005

    Am rusty because of long hiatus. Will come back to those stories after becoming comfortable with writing again

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Destiny_0192

    Hiatus because of excess uni work. Sorry about the lack of updates was a lot busy these days

    Ch 63 51. Battle of two fronts Part 2
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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Destiny_0192

    You could say after victory against Arthur all of them now are riding the hero mentality. Sentinals or not 'if Arthur the wielder of the infamous Excalibur could be defeated surely the great dragon if they face it together would not be that strong'. The impression which was given from her easy death was the reason. Besides, in this time Arthur was considered one of the strongest which gave the confidence to pursue the dragon or Ainz. The people too did not possess enough intelligence to differentiate between both and relied mostly on myths and stories for clarifications, it was still medieval times that allowed these speculations.

    Ch 62 50. Battle of two fronts Part 1
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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to David_Drake

    Will keep it in mind, thanks for the suggestion.

    Ch 61 49. Descent
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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Lustsifer

    Thanks,for,the,heads,up,mate,gonna,make,sure,to,decrease,it,and,make,sentences,more,natural,to,read.:)

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Lustsifer

    Nah, while, the restriction on the summoning was placed in the previous chapters it was mentioned that Arturia wanted magic to not wane in Britain. That was her original wish for the grail and so a lot of people were killed for it in this timeline, distracting others, while, ainz, stabilized the magic system, himself. It was mentioned before the battle against justinus. The following events also waned Alaya's influence and with god's presence still in the world, the will of humanity was still not strong enough, to counter it. Lastly, the power given to Ainz came at a cost to not only Ainz but to Gaia herself, a part of her is inside of him. So, it is not like she rejects it, if so, the magic would have failed.

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Lustsifer

    Okay, I will tone down on the comma's.

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Lustsifer

    What's your battle, with the comma thingy, man? Comma's give the sentences, some structure, without it, the sentences, would get, more confusing, hope that answer's, the query. For good measures, I added, more comma's, here as well.:)

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Alex_von_graneia

    Please tell me what's confusing so, I can fix it.

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Paradox1614

    Aria or Areia Aphrodite. It was normal in Yggdrasil to kill gods, you know. Though more exposition will happen in future chapters.

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to Alex_von_graneia

    A short summary for the events until now would be, "The world is a better place without King Arthur"

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  • Xshamee
    Xshamee3yr
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    I will just say it outright, to clear any misunderstanding. This is not yaoi. I repeat this is not yaoi.Also, this is not a harem(Harem requires at least four members and I also mentioned the love interest is artoria even if is an alternate one);)

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to David_Drake

    It's not yaoi. I do not even know, why people would think this after chapter ch. 60!! If it was yaoi then i would have already ended it at the true ending, lol.

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to 3RR0R_404

    This comment is a gold mine. I never thought someone would misinterpret Arthus as a male, in the end, you know. When you pointed out it was yaoi or not, I was seriously confused, when was I writing yaoi? That's when it hit me, I just released one chapter. Without further info, it could be thought as yaoi, lol.

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    Xshamee3yr
    Replied to 3RR0R_404

    "There was something poking his chest" this sentence should be clear enough what gender, she is and also the reason, Ainz felt this kind of emotions, was because of the disparity from the original Arturia. He actually did not fall in love but the innocence within her in contrast to the hard-headed personality of the original Arturia, he fell in love with, caused these emotions. It's like seeing a different side, of the personality of hers. It's not yaoi but still, I am thinking, if i should include her with Ainz or not? What're your thoughts, reader?

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