Comments of chapter undefined of Overlord: In the world of Danmachi
Overlord: In the world of Danmachi
Xshamee
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If you don't make him be like Ainz, don't write a story like that, if you didn't change his character, it would have been so much better that he's an adult and cries. Only Ainz's character was making me complete the story and many have my opinion
His character never changed, but the placeholder personality acting up. Its like Suzuki's mentality becoming darker after transmigrating as an overlord. While, I could ignore it and write something that Ainz would do, but then the actions would be without consequence. After all, he transmigrated not reincarnated, the body is not even his. But again, its just seven chapters of prologue (he didn't even dive the dungeon or interact with the story characters yet), there's barely any world building or content to the story.
Nah, why do you do Ainz that dirty he just became some typical MC? I had high expectations, but in your place, I would rewrite this part. If you wanna say its because Ainz is a human, you ain't know sh. It's stated in the novels that he was walking from work and saw children dying on the streets, but he didn't care. This isn't Ainz. It's a self-insert bearing only the name, or not even that!
