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Comments of chapter undefined of I'm Finn Mertens and I've Become a Player!

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menes_menes
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be careful with words in bold as they are not translated, try using parentheses instead of bold

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Lucas_Fernandez_6333
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good chapter! this is the first time i see one from adventure time.

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MrMike
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Interesting! I’ve only seen a couple fics where the Mc is in adventure time and am looking forward to seeing how this continues! Also does he have Fin’s memories?

DeejaeSutherland
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How the characters look.

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BoboPingu
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Thanks for the chapter

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Alien_Space_Bat
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Game should be thought activated instead of voice otherwise what he do against people who can disable voice, also a situation where he had to keep silence?

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zero_m
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Great beginning, I love A.T and this story is just what I and a lot of people needed.

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Winter_slayer
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Homenagem a Morgan Freeman.

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victor_arreaza
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Thanks for chapter

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JIM_MoriOg
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Thanks for chapter

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BoboPingu
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Does sword mastery increase attack speed with swords as well?

shadowmonarchfan12
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is their gonna be a love interest for Finn / Charles in this story? if their is I'm hoping for flame princess she's always been my favorite well princess from adventure time and they way they handled her and finn's relationship left a sour note for me

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Sasuke_Uchia_9985
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This is going to be amazing

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Natanael486
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Thanks for the chapter

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Winter_slayer
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O sistema evoluirá ou irá se adaptar ao usuário, certo? Quero dizer uma boa desculpa pra quando precisar mudar alguma coisa nas configurações sem ficar protelando ou inventar alguma besteira, eu já li o capítulo da mentirá e foi uma merda. Essa é uma forma de ajustar o sistema caso tenha falhas, erros ou coisas que vc esqueceu de colocar, como alguma coisa que vc tenha visto em outra novel ou FF com sistema e queira colocar nesse.

DeejaeSutherland
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Grammar and vocabulary and dialect need major improvement.

DeejaeSutherland
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Harem

DeejaeSutherland
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Finn's body.

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