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Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn: Rise of the Greatest Summoner

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MammaNoxFox
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i loved this story so much for so long. i was disappointed in the pacing at the end where it just hand waved everything. there were no more big battle...there was no longer any intensity or gravity to any of the scenes. one of the best stories I've read but also...one of the least satisfying endings. I'm gonna go read your other works though lol

GREAT
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Lol, sorry man, but thanks still for reading, you da best! I'll be more conscious at making endings. Also, check out my newest one lol, it's my best so far and the distance is not even close

morningstar_Anime
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how can you end it like this

Chrysalis208
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curious way to end the story. I suppose it's time I gave my thoughts on this story, just as I did with ocean master. first off, I really enjoyed this story. there were several unsolved questions that I would have liked answered, but I still enjoyed it. hopefully there's room for a sequel. First off, what about the quest from Predator to investigate his father's death? and out of the three confirmed humans to be transmigrated into the game, why is it that Legolas was the one experience the events he knew of from Dominator? what did the previous two have to go through? did they too have the experiences from Dominator and some time shenanigans happened so Legolas could experience them? and if not, why was Legolas special? I believe this was unlikely due to the high level NPCs remembering the previous transmigrator, but idk. I really like how you took my suggestion about using the star radler to affect the code of the universe to give himself all of the experience he needed to level up to the peak of S Grade, looking back, I could definately see how my logic was flawed about the nature of the world. we were introduced to the God of Games fairly early and I just forgot about his existence. I'm also a little upset that we didn't see much of lucky throughout this story. I really liked her character arc. I think it's such a shame we never got to see the result of Legolas fusing with her since we found out it was possible. I simultaneously do and dont like the pacing increase at the end of this story, and just like Ocean Master, I dont have any issues with how everything played out and I appreciate the reasons as to why he jumped from B to the peak of S grade so quickly. it would have been interesting to have A grade and S grade a little more fleshed out so that other people can play in the sandbox universe you have created. my final comment for now is about Legolas becoming a pirate at the end. while I think him becoming Luffy from One Piece is hilarious. it seemed like a drastic and sudden change that was honestly very jarring. he just suddenly betrayed all of the people he held dear for so long? it seemed very out of character for him. I can certainly understand the reasons for why he became a pirate, but it was just such a jarring change that came out of seemingly nowhere. I didn't see and foreshadowing that he was even considering it before he made the change. a comment or two about him performing research into the nakk state's universal treasure would have been a subtle hint about it, but I detected nothing. idk, I just didn't like it.