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Comments of chapter undefined of Murim Adventure as a Hanma.

godlyarrogantz_305
godlyarrogantz_305Lv4godlyarrogantz_305

the concept is cool and there aren't many chronicles of heavenly demon fanfics out there, might want to work on your dialogues

GOD_KING_AQUA
GOD_KING_AQUALv15GOD_KING_AQUA

Ok so the dialogue feels off idk what it is but it all just feels wrong Chapter was ok

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VenerableDemon
VenerableDemonLv4VenerableDemon

Focus only on this. Make Mc the heavenly demon Just dont follow the Canon and all. Make the Mc evil

Night_Shroud
Night_ShroudLv4Night_Shroud

Thanks for the chapter. I feel like the Japanese name feels off in a Korean manhwa

streiz
streizLv13streiz

Thank you for the chapter! I love it!

edu_rodeiro
edu_rodeiroLv15edu_rodeiro

I still have no idea who our mc really is? a manwha reader in the body of Hanma? or is he Hanma himself?

Adenilson_Almeida
Adenilson_AlmeidaLv1Adenilson_Almeida

to gostando muito cara continua fazendo por favor nao descarta por favor

AnakinSky
AnakinSkyLv13AnakinSky

Good

Marcus_whatever
Marcus_whateverLv2Marcus_whatever

Good