Nobody2NoBody
Yeesh, why did the translator pick this novel to work on? This was just downright cookie cutter, by the formula, op/wish fulfillment nonsense we've seen a thousand times. Absolutely Bereft of anything original, and the dialog? Id bet my house that 'your courting death' springs up in the original work quite a bit.
So far? This hits every beat in the formula. But to be fair, the translation is very competent, making the run of the mill story quite tolerable. I can let this play in text to speech all day without wanting to pull my hair out. As it's a bit longer, hopefully it gets better. I'm curious though, are there any well translated Chinese Naruto fics out there that do a good job of capturing the world building and characterisations of Naruto with a good plot?