VeganMaster
Author I have a suggestion. Introduce a new OC in the form of one of the orphans, for example the one kid without a leg. All I'm saying is to have a mini side story of said kids experience though the Dark Brotherhood, not only would it give some useful worldbuilding for the Brotherhood, it would also make the audience more attached to it and the characters within it. I say this because I am really interested about what happens inside the brotherhood, more that what has already been said. Just some food for thought.