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Voterat15hCommentedAre you implying that every toilet a mile from here is housing a log, unflushed?
'I can smell every dumpster and toilet within a mile of here...' He thought in disgust.- Voterat2dReplied to _Miyasaka
Guys, I think I'm immortal now!
Mental note, looking into immortality or anti-ageing Quirks. - Voterat3dReplied to Drojam
Isn't Mc supposed to be a good person?
"See for yourselves. This is your new planet as well as our exit. Hurry home and pack your things! The New Sakaar is waiting for you!" - Voterat3dCommented
What are you talking about? If you're transporting all the sakarrians to an uninhabited planet, you're going to have to build an entire city for them. You can't just transport them to the wild and expect them to survive, as bruinnhilde said sakkarians are stupid. Transporting an entire civilization to a different planet is magnitudes more complicated than establishing a new ruler. If you honestly expect that sending all of these people into the wild is fine, and won't result in hundreds of people dying, then you're braindead. And even if, no one dies, they all survive, there life is going to be miserable compared to Sakkar, at least until they build some housing and infrastructure. Sorry for the rant.
"True, but many of the citizens here are, for lack of a better phrase, dumb f*ck morons. They may decide that they like it here and just stay. In fact, I'm sure a small amount of them definitely will." Brunnhilde nods to herself. "You have to remember that there are no schools here. Most Sakaarans aren't the brightest of minds." - Voterat3dReplied to Foodi
You're not funny
(A/N: You can't say the R word anymore... God I miss that word.) - Voterat10dCommented
Author, have you heard of, show not tell? Pretty much in this situation, you should show Tony's personality in action instead of telling me about it.
But as soon as Tony saw something wrong, he wouldn't miss the opportunity to make some sarcastic comment or something, since that was part of his personality, the only difference would be that now he wasn't actively looking for flaws in the game. - Voterat20dReplied to monkyphil
- Voterat21dCommented"Wow. I usually condemn cowards that resort to self-immolation and explosives to take out their enemies, but that was pretty badass," said a woman with pale, lavender-tinged white hair, matching eyes, and skin so fair it could be called luminous. Her ensemble resembled some kind of priestess outfit, but her most striking feature was the strange triangular halo hovering over her head as she tossed a piece of fluffy white popcorn into her mouth.
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I consider this **** with a plot, But that's beside the point. I was saying that the average person considers fanfiction as simply just lemons. Fanfiction like this contributes to that misconception. This is nothing against the quality or the writing of this fic. For all, I know this is the best fanfiction ever written! I'm just disgusted that this exists in the first place. Disclaimer: This is an opinion! It is absolutely fine if you disagree with me. But please don't come attacking me for not liking a fanfiction you enjoyed.
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