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Reverend Apocalypse

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James_Jones_4468
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fyi the way you use "said himself Mark" should be Mark said and where you use "Mark said aloud" the only time you use that should be if it will be heard by others around him but most of the time it is implied just trying to make it flow better. great concept so far.

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kommers
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Yeap, is a little redundant I will try to avoid, thanks :)

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MediocreSkater
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This power is restrictive now but around 5 years later it should be a lot easier as mot animals would have some mutations. 10 years later means everything is mutated so he can live normally like before but aliens will also come so RIP

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FeeDMixX
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I'm hyped for Power-up.

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Armand
ArmandLv6Armand

thanks for the chapter

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Nickjr321
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Thanks for the chap

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