Pinkyprincess
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This story is really interesting. I mean about the King of Darkness. It is a perfect way to start off what looks to be a wonderful story.
I think it’s great! I’ not sure any other prologue would have worked!m
Pinkyprincess:Yeah, I actually wrote this prologue after writing a bunch of chapters.
Thanks for the chapter! that was a rather interesting start and I loved the story telling
love the prologue
great start
interesting start
The start is very good and intresting
umm....so the poison is here... good going
uh oh. The reflection moon. since then i feel it goes to my room. then bang. nice start. really nice
That moment when grandma forgot to take her medicine
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola