Comments of chapter undefined of As a Low-level Warrior I Can Copy the Talents of Others

Hmmm. I read up to chapter 15 and to br honest it was uncomfortable to read. so fast paced somewhat illogical and slightly childish. Its like getting an inspiration to create something wonderful like a sculpture then altering it due to narcissism.the idea of this book is really good but it somehow feels like a wish fulfillment novel. In my opinion it should be rewritten after researching and fleshing out the characters and the world background.