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Comments of chapter undefined of Son of Jiraiya and Zabuza's Waifu Adventure

B0ssu
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That brothel must have some amazing seal work, because there's no way Hiruzen can be still alive if his telescope jutsu can peep into the red light district.

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InternetSaint
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The MC reminds me of the Raikage. Under him the Kyuubi and the Uchiha clan would have gotten bullied into compliance through his fists alone!

venomwave
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If there is a phrase to describe your fics is "gotta go fast" It's rushes past the plot so fast and with so many monologues. If you'd slow down just a tiny bit to make things more complex your fics would probably be my favorites.

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David_Drake
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My man

ItsNotTheMoon
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Hokage !!? What ?that came out of nowhere

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

LifelessMan
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Good Work

Clerith
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I usually laugh out multiple times per chapter, and I absolutely adore the way you cleave through all the nonsense in both canon and fanon, and appear to make perfect, logical, real sense. Your writing style is also extremely unique, and it's always a treat to read a new story from you solely because of that.

Dark_Soulsbestgame
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Nice

RamenGuy
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Great chapter

manuel91
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Gracias por el capítulo 👍

THOTSLAYER
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thnx for the chapter, can't wait for the next