Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Monarch System
Dragon Monarch System
Dark_Bangali
Chapter comments4
Really don’t understand how the MC can see all that he has in his vision, and still go about things like he isn’t facing a crisis. I’d expect him to be taking steps to prevent that future or at least be prepared for it, but his focus is this inconsequential wedding that I’m absolutely sure will end up in disaster.
Have no particular dislike for your novel. It’s simply on hold for me as of now as there aren’t many chapters to read, along with it’s somewhat slower pace. If there’s a single thing I’m not particularly a fan of, it’d be how the MC is stated to be an existence to be wary of(OP) and what not, but even up to where I’ve read we readers still have no clear understanding of his strength or standing. I saw you reply to another that you don’t want to bombard us with info-dumps, but there are too many things which are unclear to us and may come off as being overly-mysterious which can be a bit frustrating to read after a period of time in my opinion. When this novel has reached, say 150-200+ chapters, I’d be a lot more inclined to begin reading again as I’m hoping various things will have been answered by then.
lucifer_2805:Hey, I just saw you were reading my book and didn't seem to continue it. So can you tell me if you didn't like anything so I can improve? it'll help me understand why people might potentially drop my novel. Or is it because that's simply not your taste?