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Binding System

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So he was so secret with his system but telling random people how strong he is and that he has unlock all class really and the chick even told em he learn magic really fast even though she know it well shock the world yeap there no flag there the people are straight braindead.

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Hey author, Just saying...'Else' is a weird name to choose for FL because it is coordinating conjunction in English grammar, you should change it to something like Elise or 'else', readers will find it confusing lol. Also it would be better if it is something else entirely & do not starts with letter E because Evelyn and Else can get confusing in long run when a reader comes back after few days and dont remember the characters...just saying from experience.

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