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Comments of chapter undefined of Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.

Kirito_Link
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'back to the caravan to prepare for her departure'

Dao_of_Bibliomania
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Sorry I am not done but I am in the middle of doing so

papajka
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thanks for the chapter

Kirito_Link
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'seriously not a single demon in sight'

Kirito_Link
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'"Hmm? What do you mean?"'

Kirito_Link
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'let me prepare'

Kirito_Link
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'The two immediately recognized'

Kirito_Link
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'to notice her as one of them'*

Kirito_Link
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Hey, has anyone seen my lyre?*

Discarded
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so what gender the mc is!?!?

Shampion
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nice chapter

Dao_of_Bibliomania
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I am now done editing, thanks for the chapter!, I will edit the other chapters latter if you want me to continue editing

Dao_of_Bibliomania
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There, I am done editing, but try to specify which child is speaking in this scenario, they are characters too, it decreases from the immersion if you just leave it obscurely