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Comments of chapter undefined of Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.

Dao_of_Bibliomania
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I have finished editing all of the chapters

Jingle303
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Well something like this. his right horn is shorter while his left horn his way longer, his horn's is something more like a cresent moon shape

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Dao_of_Bibliomania
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Thanks for the chapters, this is interesting, keep up the good work, I hope you stick true to the frieren power system, have you read the manga?, though it should take a very very long time for him to alter his mind safely, I mean brains are very complex so he could figure some simple stuff out in a few months but they are complex as I have said before, and that is without this world having magic where they can use magic from their imagination and/or studying and figuring out the principles, like how the humans managed to recreate that demon general's magic after a few decades, but I am just staying this to share my thoughts/opinion, ultimately this is your story and you should write however and whatever you wish, good luck

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Kirito_Link
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'I made sure to remind myself'*

Kirito_Link
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'Their' Not 'there' for something's belongings ta plural.

Lord_Fate_Master
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Let's hope that demon seer won't find him

Shampion
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nice chapter