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the chapter is quite good. the action thrilling. yet the use of some words is like a stone in the shoe. It would be nice to revise this chapter without changing the plot.
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Very suspenseful plenty of action and good plotting.
It's getting thrilling.
Even though Diana is such in hard situation it seems she knows how to keep the level of savageness. I'm laughing. Lol
Hmmmm, noise đł
man there are so many new words that I'm learning.
It's good plot. Loved the way you describe Diana last line. Hope next chapter will be more thrilling đ¤đđ
Time for some action!
Fell in love with the prolonged. Gonna download the app now
Nice beginning đđ
