Immortal_Orca
i hope she get´s mentaly more mature tough, a bit hard to believe that a (in both lives together) 27 or so street-rat would have the mental capacity of a unschooled 6-8 year old. even passive you would pick up more and be mental more mature. tough only my opinion, the story is nice (leaving the cringe out)
Thanks for the comment. About Koko getting more mature, this isn't a story about Koko's emotional developement and gradual maturity into adulthood, it's literally her messing with everyone and how that will affect the world at large. If you were waiting for it to eventually happen, it's probably not unfortunately. Just wanted to clear it up now in case you were waiting for it. Also thanks for not just writing 'bad novel' and being done with it.