Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Master In The Apocalypse

hum, the start. we have cliches debt, and loan sharks but no lawyers or guns. and I'm guessing their IQ is really low. not looking too good.

good start .. thanks for the chapter

Writing style feels a bit off somehow, a bit stilted maybe? Not exactly sure, but I hope it improves as the author practices his craft

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arrigato gozaimasu for the chapter

I just think the poor pitiful family in debt bit is a little over done in general across the board when I read this chapter it felt unnecessary and unneeded it could have been like two paragraphs and it would have been better and you still haven't really described any characters so we the readers have no idea what these people even look like

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Great chapter.

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Cliche start, but let see

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Thanks for the chapter

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