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Comments of chapter undefined of Madara in the Avatar World

Daoist6JRonk
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Why care what Aang thinks. I hope he won't go around being a monk or some šŸ’© just to be his friend. He better atleast kill his enemies.

kumTMR
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well if it means anything i love reading this story it got even better later goood enough that i can enjoy it

KojiSan:while i do agree that i need to chill, you have no idea about the amount of annoying coments i have to deal on a daily basis x.x this fanfiction wasnt made to be realistic but to follow the theme of the show. i wanted to keep the heart and soul of ATLA through my writing, not turning it into a dark, broody, cesspool of edgyness that "realistic stories" have, i want people to read this and have the same feeling they had when watching the show
DaoistaxMkIL
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I hope that as he is in madara's body he gains a little of his personality would be cool

William_Ruiz
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9 year old Madara can slaughter the entire Kiyoshi Island but as stated he's not Madara.

Gabriel_Menard
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Thank for the chapter, i love this beggenning (please, no harem)

Ikasuki
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Madura taijutsuā€¦ could fight army Guy and godsā€¦ hereā€¦ is affraid of takes 10 peps that trained for yearā€¦ sighā€¦ this is going to be a long and painful read. 1 year and he didnā€™t try and experiment with chakra techniques or anythingā€¦. Discovered he could stick on walls at the very last moment and is conveniently taken to an island by a fishā€¦ now add the fact that we know other reincarnated are comingā€¦ this is checking all the wrong box for a horrendous read

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aman10
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so he can only do firebending

Tobirama_uchiha777
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he doesn't act like madara but like Naruto (idiotic goofus)...

Sanji23
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Libur
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Toph šŸ’Æ

AfghanistanBomber
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ZoneTail
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DaoistuBDitW
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what about sharingan. he asked for knowledge of chakra and eternal youth. If you have something then use it. Then there is using Madara's fighting experience to train fire bending which is not ideal tran the taijutsu while increasing chi and chakra pool along with chakra control after perfecting them fire bending will be much easier since Madara's primary chakra nature was also fire. That's how I would have done it, that's what's best for the long term. Know that Madra has been fighting in wars since young he not only just have knowledge from konoha Uchihas are one of the oldest clans in Naruto world.

Alpha_Ace
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Exp

TachibanaShiro
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Reading

5paghetti_5auce
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thanks for the chapter

LifelessMan
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Good Work

Khors
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šŸ‘

Grim_Remorse
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Thanks for the chapter

Eazy498
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MrMike
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Thanks for the great chap!